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caretakerofthefallen
Male, 18, elyria (trying to escape from my own hell lets see who wins), OH
"http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VRdqHzVxPQM&NR=1"
4:50pm November 16
mind thy rage Mood
Friday, December 12, 2008 | A Poem/Artistic story

                                    Mind thy rage by

                                   Andrew zlenka

 

 

     The tower has held us for many of centuries;suttporting us and protecting us from the major harm of our lives. As the tower protects us, we protect the tower from outside forces such as creatures, and the elements of the weather. But now we have to repair the tower from the base,to the top of the tower. The eear and tear of degeneration and time. Death rules from the highist level of the tower. A level lower agony and pain have ruled almost as long as death. In all there are 60  or more diffrent types of levels and rulers. In the lowest of the levels the gatekeepers rule. They have started to repair the base and the beggining levels. With time the tower shall be repaired, but with a new level coming we have to get ready for the newest levels because it could either destroy  us or build us. After the tower is repaired the newest lievel is made above the gatekeepers with patience and time the tower level is made. The newest ruler is Rage, he is strong of mind and bpdy and quick of foot. When his level is compleete he tried to get stronger power and infulence over the tower. And eventually rage became on the 3rd highest level and rage found he could not go any higher.After sometime the tower was reduced to 6 levels.At the top was death, then life, after life it is rage. After rage it is agony and pain on a level. After that it is wisdom,guidence, and courage. At the lowest level were all of the others but at the  geate the gatekeepers always rule and always shall. TO keep the shorteneed tower up was 6towers and each had a diffrent chant on it talking about the two highest kings  death, and life. The first one saiid;death is of life'the second pillar said'and life is of death.' on the third piller it said 'and death is thee!' the fourth pillar said'and life is thee! the fifth pillar said 'and death is me' on the last one it said 'and life is me!' with all created the towwer held. but soon the dead from deaths level escaped into  the level of life and kept going to the gate and the dead left the tower  with out a problem because without death there is no life. And with ut life no reage or any of the other emotions all creatures feel not just 'humans' and with that the rage of the 'living dead' the outside creatures were in danger. But those in he tower could not leave execpt the dead. With chaos around the tower the tower eventually dissapppeared with  time all because of a 'new' level on the tower. all the chaos  lasted  a centuary  and eventually things cooled down enogh  for the chaos not to be off-kilter again -end (is old story idk when i wrote it srry)

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Comments

  1. kdiva07

    your writing is too weird


    kdiva07

  2. caretakerofthefallen

    why do u say that?


    caretakerofthefallen

  3. broken927

    its not weird, its just different, which is a good thing


    broken927

  4. caretakerofthefallen

    aye but most of my wrighting is


    caretakerofthefallen

  5. kathyhope

    Im sorry, but I have held my tongue too long in this lifetime. I always fear confrontation. Im facing my fears tonight. I work with children ages 0-12 years all day. I guess I may have to repeat to you 'kdiva07' what is told to young children all day "If You Have Nothing Nice To Say, Try Not Saying Anything At All". DS is a support group. Someone is opening up and allowing you the opportunity to read some of their work. Someone that is talking about suicide. Writing is a way for some to help redirect their "bad" or "negative" feelings. Pat yourself on the back. Way to go for helping make Andrew feel better about himself. Andrew your work is not "weird". Your work is a form of art. It is absolute creativity at its best. I have told you time and time again, that I appreciate you and understand you completely through your writing. I have also told you that I hope others appreciate your work as well. 'Broken927' thank you for your kind words to my friend. He has a good heart and he deserves nothing less. Andrew keep writing. I love your work. You are a very talented writer. I always look forward to reading whatever it is you write:)


    kathyhope

  6. caretakerofthefallen

    ty and i know i shall but i love hearing from critics also hun*hugs*people have their opionion


    caretakerofthefallen

  7. kathyhope

    people have their opinion and i have a saying about opinions too...its one thing to have an opinion and another to not have tact while giving it to someone that has mentioned cutting and suicide...also its great to have others critic our work- if they comprehend what they are viewing...a response of "weird" is not a valid critic...sometimes people mock what they dont understand...


    kathyhope

  8. caretakerofthefallen

    *hugs* still its ok


    caretakerofthefallen

  9. kathyhope

    *hugs* okay andrew...


    kathyhope

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