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caretakerofthefallen
Male, 18, elyria (trying to escape from my own hell lets see who wins), OH
"http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VRdqHzVxPQM&NR=1"
4:50pm November 16
story may cause triggers to cut or si dont read unless u are stable Mood
Monday, December 1, 2008 | A Poem/Artistic story

                  (not named)

                  by andrew z

 

   Death such a sweet nector for some. It sooths the pain, the agony of life. A young man puts the knife to his wrist 3 quick motions then it goes up his arm 3 times then his leg 3 times , he switches the knife hand 3 to the wristh then the arm, then finnaly to the le. Holding the kinife pressed to his throat the young man says 'I tried at least i can say i tried protecting them all' and does threee slashes from one side to the other then from the chin to the chest, and then stabs his heart till he is too weak to hold the blade and he slowly holds the darkness in his arms before he dies and has a small satisfied smile on his face as he dies. For he has taken everyones grief and sadness he has ever helped or hurt no more pain for them he has taken it all as his own and as he dies  their pain does also.

 

  A scared wolf howls as she gives birth to a litter of cubs 3 are still borns and one male cub-wolf survives its a timber wolf with a reddish tint of fur. Asher is its name. After years of growing and learning Asher is the leader always protecting his pack a few times he took injuries for his pack.

 

   One day as he scouted the area he heard the cry of that mans cries of pain and agony and held his spirit in him protecting him not letting him leave taking all the pain holding him, calming the mans spirit a\making it interttwine with his crying the wolf howled and howled  thill his voice was rough and cracked slowly all around death was in its eyes and accepting it  he howled one more time and then life was all around asher. Again  asher howled and now it was as it was to be  both life and death in ashers eyes, weaping softly asher changed and formed taking the form of a man, for now he was a shapechanger and could live longer than a wolf or man, but was not a god. Asher howled once more and all his pack came, one by one asher changed each of them when asher was done he turned to a wolf again and  howled as he did so the rest howled also and changed to their wolf forms.-possible to be continued idk

 

please tell me how u like it or diss like it

 

 

 

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=jrme5h9wkpm

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Comments

  1. jadedmemories

    wow that was...uh yea i'll be leaving now. but it was good.


    jadedmemories

  2. caretakerofthefallen

    *hugs*


    caretakerofthefallen

  3. rockerforlife

    wow...that was just amzing well doneits just.....wow


    rockerforlife

  4. bloodaholic

    wow that was really good andrew. the first part represents yourself does it not? idk thats what i got from it. i think you should contiue it please i hate a good stroy that goes incomplete. ^^ its a very good story cuz it has alot of representation of yourself and how you feel.


    bloodaholic

  5. caretakerofthefallen

    ty :) i only wright that usually when im in emo mode like yesterday


    caretakerofthefallen

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