for those who did not read b4 here it is again
Ocrus, my home
By andrew zlenka
I die, i fall
Down, down, to the pits
To where the bottem where there are those who are resting, sobbing, or grieving.
When I get to the bottem I grieve of what i have done
But i don't let it overcome me death like life shall go on or will go on.
Love sadness wanting to protect
Those things keep me going and I find a ladder
Going to the top of the pit,
Each level has a stop when look I see
So many levels but i climb not for me but others,
I protect and give my body as protection for
All i love and care for.
I climb for a time, and when I rest at one of the levels
I am thrown off from nothing visible and again
I fall,
I fall all the way down back to the pits yet
I climb again getting a little farther again and again.
Once I make it to the top of the pit I see
The happiness of life but after my life is over
By probly self sacrifice, I fall once more.
I climb again to protect again to die to go in agony
For all eteirnity for love of all I care for!
Or help those that i deem worthy!
I live to die orcus, my home!
-end
(ocrus=latin for the abode of the dead)(aka the underworld)






That's really good! =]
Catlovers141
ty
caretakerofthefallen
thats reli good well done:)
XxjannerxX
An interesting poem to boot! TY for the insite!
Terry
TheBadger7
yep np
caretakerofthefallen