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Intersessa
Female, 18, CAN
"Wow....Love"
10:44pm, March 20, 2009
Something That You Need Mood
Friday, September 26, 2008 | A Poem/Artistic story
Full of catastrophe
Still you have the nerve to sit there and laugh at me
As though there was something more that you could see
Like a pulsating aura surrounding me
And still I take you for who you are
In all your beauty and with all your scars
Relating your words back to your heart
Portraying your thoughts as though they were art
I can see right through your blinded eyes
The ones that try to convince the world
That you're the one thats right
What are your reasons for pursuing me?
Is it possible that I've got something you might need?
Like eternal life
Or a reason to breathe.....
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Comments

  1. emmalyn

    boy that took my breath away that eactly how i feel.It's also made me want to cry.I know what u mean by r scars.If u ever need me i'm here


    emmalyn

  2. MariaMia

    WOw! Brava! Nice poem. I loved the first two lines. My heart skipped a beat when I read it. Nice job!


    MariaMia

  3. Roxy812

    Oh my, you truly have a gift for writing!


    Roxy812

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