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ihavenoname 
7:09am, November 14, 2009
THIS WAS MY 1ST EVER POEM
this is not aimed at any1
just felt poetic and felt like writeing it
please bare in mine this is a 1st draft
baby my heart burns for you with burning desire
i love u like no other
everytime you say goodbye my heart starts to cry
my heart bleeds for you
i want 2 let you know i will always neeed you
i know my love for you seems really wrong
But my love for you has always remeind strong
i remember the 1st time i saw you
i saw the passion and fire in your eyes
everytime i look at you
i feel nothing but desire for you inside
i have never felt a love like this before
the only thing that can bring me down
is when you turn around and walk out that door
this is not aimed at any1
just felt poetic and felt like writeing it
please bare in mine this is a 1st draft
baby my heart burns for you with burning desire
i love u like no other
everytime you say goodbye my heart starts to cry
my heart bleeds for you
i want 2 let you know i will always neeed you
i know my love for you seems really wrong
But my love for you has always remeind strong
i remember the 1st time i saw you
i saw the passion and fire in your eyes
everytime i look at you
i feel nothing but desire for you inside
i have never felt a love like this before
the only thing that can bring me down
is when you turn around and walk out that door
Comments
Like it. Sad- but sometimes true. Expressed very well.
Anthony42
i like it... and i'm glad to see you, i've miseed you. :-)
SackOCrap
Pretty good for your first time! :D
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