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ihavenoname 
5:08pm
THIS WAS MY 1ST EVER POEM
this is not aimed at any1
just felt poetic and felt like writeing it
please bare in mine this is a 1st draft
baby my heart burns for you with burning desire
i love u like no other
everytime you say goodbye my heart starts to cry
my heart bleeds for you
i want 2 let you know i will always neeed you
i know my love for you seems really wrong
But my love for you has always remeind strong
i remember the 1st time i saw you
i saw the passion and fire in your eyes
everytime i look at you
i feel nothing but desire for you inside
i have never felt a love like this before
the only thing that can bring me down
is when you turn around and walk out that door
this is not aimed at any1
just felt poetic and felt like writeing it
please bare in mine this is a 1st draft
baby my heart burns for you with burning desire
i love u like no other
everytime you say goodbye my heart starts to cry
my heart bleeds for you
i want 2 let you know i will always neeed you
i know my love for you seems really wrong
But my love for you has always remeind strong
i remember the 1st time i saw you
i saw the passion and fire in your eyes
everytime i look at you
i feel nothing but desire for you inside
i have never felt a love like this before
the only thing that can bring me down
is when you turn around and walk out that door
Comments
this is callled secrets and lies and was written by me and my cousin abi its a work in progress so i will be adding new bits 2 it alll the time so check back offten for more lines:D
EVERYwere i go im faced with secrets and lies everywhere i seem to go im hit with nothing but secrets and lies you try to find the truth but everyone runs and conversation dies, what im a supposed to do, supposed to do
as i fall deeper into the sea of secrets and lies i seem 2 roll over and float in this sea of the dammned. how can i know if the truth is real or not coz alll u tell me is secrets and lies
as i sit here wondering whats the truth i come to a realisation has anyfin ive been told the past few years been true or are they all lies, was anyfin true, is everyfin a lie is someone gnna come and tell me the sky aint blue, i dont no what to believe or what to follow, drowning in a sea of confusion and doubt, no-one coming to help me out, im dieing behind thes lies and secrets, secrets and lies
more lies come floooding in as i start 2 sufffer i dont know what the truth is anymore..... as thats all u can seem 2 utter.the world is starting 2 alll make sense now as hardly anyfing is true u come up 2 me and tell me that the sky aint blue
alll the lies have been obvious coz alll the lies have been coming from you!!!
THE VOICES IN MY HEAD ARE BACK!!!!!!!! THATS wha my go away status is about
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Like it. Sad- but sometimes true. Expressed very well.
Anthony42
i like it... and i'm glad to see you, i've miseed you. :-)
SackOCrap
Pretty good for your first time! :D
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