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dreamswillcometrue
Female, 17, whereeva, BDF, GBR
"im just tryin to get better"
2:58pm, March 27, 2009
part of my stroy i wrote last nite Mood
Friday, May 9, 2008 | A Poem/Artistic story

waking up in a different room wasn't anything new. i had been drinkin way to much once again, now i had to find my way home like normal. my parents would guess that i wouldnt be home last night.

 

so as i stumble out of the unknowen house, i wondered where the hell i was and what had happen last night. I was still a virgin as far as i could tell. i sort of walk, sort of stumble on the road and notice the street name it said sliver avenue and from my local knowledge i wasnt far from home. As i walked along the road all i could thing about was having a bloke. All i wanted was a bloke who i could hold, kiss and shag but no-one would even look at me, so no-one would ever go out with me.

 

As i walked in the door, mum was sitting at the table looking disapproving and dad wasnt in like normal. You could have cut the atmosphere with a knife so i decide to hide for a bit. I headed upstairs where i put some casasda on and drift in to the music. I need to sober up before i faced mum later.

 

Let me start again. HI, my name is Anna, and im 16. I live with my mum, betty and my dad clive. This house has been a bit stressy at the moment. My mum is pergant and my dad will not accept it is his till its says in black and white it is his, so he is prepared to take a DNA test. He thinks mums been having an affiar with the milk man. So i have been trying to stay out of the way. If its not his then it will open a whole can of worms.

 

School has been one bit laught we have are GCSE in 2 weeks and i havnt bee going in. i dont see the point. Im an A* student and i will get the grades just let us go ealier. But they wont so i sit there laughting and having a good time.

 

My Friends are Amy, Melissa, Jo, Laura, Bob, Chris and Jim. We have been frineds for ages and i no the boys wouldnt go out with me but hey we have a laught. They are not rebal like me but hey i dont care.

 

 

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Comments

  1. itsnotreal

    lol the dad has the same name as mine.


    itsnotreal

  2. harry1945

    Jazz: i think your story is well-constructed, but you really need to work on spelling. The mis-spelled words detract from the story value. The story is clearly based upon life experience. I commend you on this exercise in therapeutic journaling, and I certainly hope it was helpful to you. I hope my opinions are helpful. HUGS!


    harry1945

  3. Motherearth

    well i think that its good, as harry1945 said, it is well constucted but you did misspell a couple words and thats ok cause this is just a draft...this is good for you to do, so come on and write more hunny!


    Motherearth

  4. sparkyy089

    hey i like ur story. i think that you got a good start. i look forward to reading more :)


    sparkyy089

  5. Survivable

    The beginning of the story really caught my interest, good going. The rest is good too. I cann't wait to read some more. Is it true? I'd love to read a good ending. Hugs :)


    Survivable

  6. dreamswillcometrue

    thanks there is more one the way and wat i hav in my plan is really extting i cant wait to acctually write it


    dreamswillcometrue

  7. wtuder

    awsome really good i like it alot.


    wtuder

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