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DARK NIGHT- POEM Mood
Saturday, March 15, 2008 | A Poem/Artistic story
So lifeless so broken so untouchable
one that you cant save
another tomorrow on its way
another reason why i fear death
i reply my memories the bonfire burning
i can feel the heat touching my skin
burning away into my soul
some ppl have it all while others just wait
for the fall.
the stary night shinning
down so bright
the city lights make me feel so small
i long for something more
the lights dont shine for me
eternal darkness is my reward
for my mistakes of the past
that i cant let do for
i have left this
life long ago. 
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Comments

  1. vitamin

    Dear Claire,

    this is a moving and emotional piece of work. You write well. lots of love


    vitamin

  2. mammy

    So good you are able to get your feelings out. My heart goes out to you. Try to remember that Jesus is the light of the world and through Him we don't have to have eternal darkness as our reward. When we accept Him as our savior we pass from darkness into light. He took your and my mistakes of the past and died on the cross so that we can now come before a Holy God when we put our trust in Him. Wonderful! That is why it is the good news!


    mammy

  3. SAFFAGIRL

    hiya luv thats a very moving piece but I have to agree with the ur friend mammy.it was wellsaid and very true. JUST BELIEVE LUV, BELIEVE IT. lol. xxx


    SAFFAGIRL

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