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JonSnow 
Hollow
Look at my hollow eyes
The bottom of an old well
Dry and empty
Bereft of its life-giving purpose
Hear my voice crack
A torrid riverbed
The only rushing forward
Vacant words of reason
Feel my heart break
A shattered mirror
Losing myself
The vision of myself
Watch my soul unwind
A tapestry unraveling
The picture becoming colored string
The story untold
A dream interrupted
An ideal subdued
A storm tossed boat
Hurled on the rocks
Comments
this is very very vivid, it reminds me of how I feel when I am going down. Did you write this yourself? You are so talented.
sweetpeay06
Yeah, this is my latest one.
JonSnow
This is incredible! It is very moving to me. I have felt this way lately, but I am not very literary and am always impressed when people can put these thoughts so vividly into words.
kre81967