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EXPRESSIVE GLANCES Mood
Wednesday, September 10, 2008 | A Poem/Artistic story

EXPRESSIVE GLANCES

 

a hurt heart allows tears to show

down that beautiful face they flow..

burning within very slowly

lookng at memories sadly..

there has been love and also strife

but we have seen miracles in life..

a return from the one we desire

it lifts our hearts with fire..

startled with a gasp we gaze

thinking reality or just a haze?

we begin just staring

a smile brings flutters amazing..

we glance deep into the expression

is that the sparkle of adoration?

that twinkle we had been so used to

 has returned to say I love you..

more weeping from the eyes of sadness

new tears of innermost happiness..

 

written by me UZMAN 10 sept 2008

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Comments

  1. Zanobia

    Beautifully expressed...


    Zanobia

  2. shea

    Its Beautiful..Amazingly expressed...


    shea

  3. jav

    BEAUTIFUL, GET YOUR TALENTS PUBLISHED...LOVE POEMS...


    jav

  4. JaydenSuzanne

    This is one of the most beautiful poems Ive read


    JaydenSuzanne

  5. randown

    This is an amazing poem. I can totally relate to it.


    randown

  6. lilmskeys

    What a love you are...


    lilmskeys

  7. grimmybear

    Excellent, I hope you have your poems copyrighted!! You are such a prolific writer :)


    grimmybear

  8. malice1

    Thats beautiful! You express yourself well!


    malice1

  9. tylercj

    very good man! awesome job!


    tylercj

  10. lonelyjane

    You always want the truth and at first it was a very simmilar poem to ones you have written but belive me the second part after reading slowly sucked me in to make me think its one of your best,a masterpiece.Now what do I want you to write?


    lonelyjane

  11. poetic1

    I love how you have the ability to capture a heart and the gift to make it feel.


    poetic1

  12. angeleyes818

    All of your poems are amazing. Very heartfelt.


    angeleyes818

  13. stephinatlanta

    What a complex understanding of loves emotions.Such insight must come from life's experiences.


    stephinatlanta

  14. kakalover0220

    YOU do write beautifully!!!! I love it!!! I would hope that YOU are in the process of writing a book....IT is well desereved. xxxooo, M-


    kakalover0220

  15. jessd

    This reminds me of the love for my children..a love so deep it aches at times..I don't know if that's how you meant it but that's how I took it..a love no other could compare...


    jessd

  16. kitty41

    love the pomeing


    kitty41

  17. Rose8

    That was beautiful!


    Rose8

  18. caldewith

    It’s so good. I’m curious as if it hinders a little personal story.


    caldewith

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