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UZMAN 
A SAD GOODBYE
Coming out of luvs fantasy
as he comprehend his tragedy
tears roll down from his eyes
whilst others observe AS this mans cries..
its never too late to say never
he asks does he get anything ever?
no photo no telephone ring
if he does only then will she sing..
waking up after midnight
just to see if she was all right
trying to carve a hole in her heart
burning up his every part..
Then came a hint he was only in the middle
so he asked if true is this riddle?
no conclusive answers came flying by
so he gave a sad ultimatum high..
a very difficult option was given
him or me is a major option..
she wanted both for good reason
he realised he was only there for a season..
he may have felt luvingly used
also in many ways maybe abused..
his dream wanted nothing superficial
her request was not untill its official..
a few dollars spent here and there
looking back NOT all in despair..
my lesson..even if someone screams they luv U
Dont believe until their actions do...
WRITTEN BY UZMAN AUG 26 2008
Comments
Oh UZMAN...this is really sad :(
Zanobia
WOW, NOT ONLY SAD BUT DEEP. I LOVE THE WAY YOU EXPRESS YOURSELF IN YOUR POEMS. YOU ARE TRULY A PASSIONATE MAN.
ROBIN68
What a sad poem. So sorry you feel so sad.Make sure you don't burn your bridges before you cross them.
stephinatlanta
that is a great poem,sorry u have a broken heart/but dont let anyone break ur spirit.i think you r a very sweet,kind,n write so inspiringly
disa
Whats happened?this brings tears to my eyes very different to your norm
lonelyjane
I believe sometimes we "mask" our pain with laughter and a spirit that is so strong it can smile and laugh through tears and pain. There is nothing more enduring than love,but there is also nothing so powerful as faith. Just be strong and remember, there is nothing a person can do to you that time won't heal. Also, I have learned the hard way,the plan for your life has already been chosen. You have no control over where God will take you, or what He will take you from. I am truly sorry for your pain.I know you don't deserve it. But some of life's greatest gifts have come from our greatest mistakes. And have you ever noticed how some of life's greatest journey's are made by standing completly still? That is because God moves! And whatever your tragedy or circumstane, He will clear the path and lead you through. Count your blessings, they are in abundance compared to your misgivings. I pray for your strength and I am always here for you and I am a great listner. Love you.
poetic1
when we love so deeply and truely we will do anything to make it last.Even forget our pride,for it has been forgotton,misplace because our love is blinded by rose coloered glasses.Even went we try to forget,our pain we push aside,even mask it for a while,until it sadden us to the point we cannot make it.We learn there is no other,yet we have to go on in our pain,and make the best of it.No matter how hard we try to make them love us,if's it is not there,you'll never make it.We cannot chose who we love,but love we do,but if it is not returned,its a love that is so blue,the color will turn you inside out,your mind does not want to accept it,yet another word spoken and it cuts like a knift,why me you ask?Why can't you love me,can't you see how much i love you,how much i care,i give you my heart,only to have you to tear it apart,for what,because you can and then sit and laugh at my own expence.Then you turn and make your way onward,even in your pain you laugh,try so hard not to let anyone see how deep the knift went.Love is suppose to be a two way street,but for some it is only a one lane road,you travel alone.But it is the greatest gift from our on mistakes,a choise we have made.I am truely sorry for your pain,iknow it was not what you had in mind for your life,but you must move forward,and learn from this mistake.Will you ever be able to love again,thats what you will be looking for,i pray it will come again,even stronger,maybe this one will retrue your love even more than before.You will for get how horrible you once felt,your heart my not be whole ,but yet this other love will fill the gap.You will sit in awe that at last you can rest,your heart,your love have been given a second chance.God has bless you yet again,but this time your love we be return and you will never ever have to cry again.Look for that love,if it happens then you are truly blessed,if not then you have your friends to lend you a loving hand.Count your blessing and know you are worth everything! I pray for your strenght to move forward and know i am a true friend,who will listen.Give yourseft time to heal and know that you are not alone but have so many friends,as i am one of them,who will listen with a faithful heart,i will never judge you,only encourage you.Love,shea..........
shea
Did someone go and break your heart Uzman? I am touched to see such gifting in you come out like this, and I really really have missed you..and would never use you, so you're always safe here...she must have been young,,too young to know what she had before she let it go..her loss babe..you're a great catch! Don't forget it either!!! xo lil
lilmskeys
Some loves are just not meant to last forever..even if it's what we think we want at the time..better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all...:)
jessd