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11:32am, December 11, 2008
The Final Fee
By: Kara DeVaan and Emily Stanley
My eyes seem heavy
My mind won’t shut up
These dangerous thoughts
Keep floating about
I have a intense longing
To cut myself deep
To see my blood flowing
A permanent sleep
I’m tired of life,
New lines in my arms
All my blood flowing
Losing all of life’s charms
Locked behind these doors,
Permanently closed
My anti-social escape
From emotional blows
I’m finally tired,
I’m done with the lies
I’m done with this sadness
I’m done with this guise.
I want people to see
What life means to me
To finally feel peace
Death’s the final fee
Comments
This is a very heart moving poem and at the same time very alarming to me. Are these the thoughts of what you want to do or are you just letting the pain out? Are you contemplating suicide? This kind of writing is a real trigger for me and sets off my anxiety of worrying. Please let me know if you are considering suicide? I'm sitting at my computer awaiting your reply.
Meekacat
Oh my beloved young friend, it worries me to see you writing such things. You are so bright and talented. You have so much to give the world. We need you. I need you!
barbieO
This is very worrysome to me. I know we dont communicate that much but my friends, internet and in person friends, mean a lot to me. Please think about this. love ya
ladycobra
nice but at the same time it worries me. Are u o.k.?? ((HUGS))
Teardrop665