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Impulse
Posted on 11/08/09, 01:37 am
Impulse
Cannot the genesis of rising love
breathe the exquisiteness of harmony?
Or could these acts of fornication shove
pebbles on the shores of disharmony?
Will infatuation preserve passion,
between the bosoms of fondness reside?
Does devotion emerge out of fashion,
without commitment, simply cast aside?
No, these moments of tenderness are pure.
Gently, they share together in wonder,
nourished with honey kisses, to be sure.
Tracing unbound beauty, none may sunder.
Never will rain wash this ardor away,
everlasting love lives, beyond allay.
2009
Barry Weeder
Cannot the genesis of rising love
breathe the exquisiteness of harmony?
Or could these acts of fornication shove
pebbles on the shores of disharmony?
Will infatuation preserve passion,
between the bosoms of fondness reside?
Does devotion emerge out of fashion,
without commitment, simply cast aside?
No, these moments of tenderness are pure.
Gently, they share together in wonder,
nourished with honey kisses, to be sure.
Tracing unbound beauty, none may sunder.
Never will rain wash this ardor away,
everlasting love lives, beyond allay.
2009
Barry Weeder
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Reply #1 11/12/09 5:17pm
Wow, Barry-sexy!! ;-) -
Reply #2 11/13/09 3:13pm
I heart Shakespearian sonnets!
Wonderful imagery, the vocab was great. I loved it.
Keep writing!
Owl -
Reply #3 11/15/09 2:11am
Thanks Jen and Owl...alright!!! I was hoping someone would know what that was. :)
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