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Lost Forever
Posted on 11/07/09, 05:11 pm
The black night was calming as she settled in.
He banged on the door.
Blood dripping on the floor.
She rose from her chair.
Completely unaware.
The knife he held wet witrh rain.
Didn't erase the red blood stain.
She ran to the room.
She new not of her doom.
His rotten teeth.
Her cotton sheeth.
She lifts the lock.
He grips no shock.
She gasps
in his grapse.
The knifer goes in.
The filthy grin.
The blood on the floor.
He mistook her for a whore.
Regret he faces.
Lesbian races.
Breana Spencer 11/7/09
He banged on the door.
Blood dripping on the floor.
She rose from her chair.
Completely unaware.
The knife he held wet witrh rain.
Didn't erase the red blood stain.
She ran to the room.
She new not of her doom.
His rotten teeth.
Her cotton sheeth.
She lifts the lock.
He grips no shock.
She gasps
in his grapse.
The knifer goes in.
The filthy grin.
The blood on the floor.
He mistook her for a whore.
Regret he faces.
Lesbian races.
Breana Spencer 11/7/09
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Reply #1 11/08/09 1:22am
Tragic with a good pace. Very intense work. -
Reply #2 11/08/09 1:26am
I edited out the extra one Breana - looked like a double posting...let me know if it was not somehow.
Barry
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