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Posted on 09/11/09, 11:49 am
Awakening, my brain still fuzzy
Stretching, my body stiff from sleep
Reaching, my hand touches cold pillow
Remembering, you are no longer there
Opening, my eyes see the bareness beside me
Longing, my arms ache to hold you
Knowing, I mean nothing to you
Wondering, where you are now.
Musing, will I find love again?
Stretching, my body stiff from sleep
Reaching, my hand touches cold pillow
Remembering, you are no longer there
Opening, my eyes see the bareness beside me
Longing, my arms ache to hold you
Knowing, I mean nothing to you
Wondering, where you are now.
Musing, will I find love again?
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Reply #1 09/11/09 12:40pm
amazing stuff (again) jen. and i'm sure you will btw. -
Reply #2 09/11/09 1:15pm
thanks scott, i'm sure i will too. someday. :-) -
Reply #3 09/12/09 2:18am
I'm loving how you started each line...nice, original. This has an unfinished feel to it, though....perhaps that happy ending. -
Reply #4 09/12/09 10:39am
Barry, you know, I felt the same way after I wrote that last line, that I needed to write more, but it didn't come to me so I left it. Once it hits me I'll come back to it. :-)
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