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Timeless (Needs to be centered)
Posted on 10/18/08, 03:29 am
Timeless
Enfolded by the spirit of love,
our searching is over at last.
Timeless destiny shows us
this infinite treasure.
We share in beauty
every moment.
Together,
we are
there.
There
we are,
together.
Every moment,
we share in beauty
this infinite treasure.
Timeless destiny shows us
our searching is over at last,
enfolded by the spirit of love.
Barry
©2003
Enfolded by the spirit of love,
our searching is over at last.
Timeless destiny shows us
this infinite treasure.
We share in beauty
every moment.
Together,
we are
there.
There
we are,
together.
Every moment,
we share in beauty
this infinite treasure.
Timeless destiny shows us
our searching is over at last,
enfolded by the spirit of love.
Barry
©2003
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Reply #1 10/18/08 12:05pm
Barry, this was awesome! -
Reply #2 10/19/08 3:21am
Thank you jlynn. Here is another I wrote for my wife.
Play With Me
Gaze into the water,
bathe here in the stream.
Play with me today now,
down among the trees.
Look upon the blue sky,
shapes there in the clouds.
Resting in the meadow,
follow them around.
Touching in the lush grass,
kissing in sunlight.
Play with me today now,
Summer time is here.
2002
Barry
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Reply #3 10/19/08 12:20pm
Aww, very sweet! Makes me long for summer to come back. :-) -
Reply #4 10/19/08 2:17pm
I like this and how each word chosen described the love you feel. Isn't what most of us are looking for? "Enfolded by the spirit of love." It is what I want in my life. Good subject matter. -
Reply #5 10/19/08 8:09pm
BW-I absolutely agree! -
Reply #6 10/23/08 3:01am
nice to see you and read you barry, thnks -
Reply #7 10/23/08 6:03am
Thank you my friends.
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