angelglory

The Mystery

Posted on 08/04/11, 06:51 pm

How about a challenge can you put several Haikus together to make one poem like this

The Mystery

The mystery is
Who are we, what will we be
In our Father's hands

How will He mould us
Will life ever be the same
Is that what we want

To stay where we are
To never change, to settle
In the place we're in

He wants to hold us
To forever touch our heart
And make us complete

• Reply #1 08/05/11  7:42am
  
  KeepHoldingOn
  you are truly gifted...
• Reply #2 08/05/11  7:39pm
  
  angelglory
  Thanks Keep, I will admit that the idea was originally from a tutor of mine who collected our efforts at Haikus and put them all together and I loved the result so did a few of my own. And to be fair Keep I am not the only one, you to are gifted and don't ever doubt that love Sharon

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