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My So Called Friend

Posted on 06/15/08, 01:12 am
I put a smile upon my face

All the feelings I erase.

I wonder if you can see

That all this pain is from you to me.

I wonder why you say the things you do

Is it cause you need help too?

Why do you hurt me this way?

You are my friend is what I used to say.

But I will not say it anymore

Because my head and heart are just to sore.

And if you ever do find out

What my thoughts are all about

I'm sure you'll ask me to forgive

And I'll tell you no, I've got my life to live.

To find people who trully care

About my feelings, they'll let me share.
Showing 3 Replies
  • Reply #1 06/15/08  7:08am
    hang in there you write awesomly
  • Reply #2 06/15/08  7:52pm
    I'm glad that you shared this poem with us.
  • Reply #3 06/16/08  10:52am
    Wonderful heartfelt poem


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