GDJ1957

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Posted on 10/17/09, 09:55 am

I look up to the sky
All i see are gray clouds
I look for flowers
All i see are weeds
I pray to God for help
All i get is nothing in return
I try to find some thing
All i find is emptiness
I look in the mirror
All i see is a stranger
I try to live
All i do is exist

• Reply #1 10/17/09  12:51pm
  
  chechy
  Great poem; sometimes I too feel like everything is not as it should be and there doesn't seem to be a way out of the monotony of living.
• Reply #2 10/21/09  9:29pm
  
  PorcelainSoul
  Great poem. We can really feel the pain through your words. We can relate to this alot.
  Thanks for sharing.

welcome to poems written in blood. i once created a group called write away the pain. now i'm going to start over and see how many poets are out there. if anyone has a good poem to share or create. this is the right place for you. remember writing heals.