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The Only Ones Who Really See Me
Posted on 10/16/09, 11:09 pm
The day the world stopped I kept on moving
Till I flew threw a window
And the shards of glass were flying
Cutting into my skin and with each new cut
I was that much closer to tears
The ones I promised to keep to myself
What a foolish promise
But then, these are foolish times
And the horses next door seem to know it
They cry with me
They cry with me till I swear
That I will never give up
Till the tragic sound reaches god
And his mercy crashes down
God save my soul
Please save my soul
Sometimes times I feel that he can hear me
Yet, Other times I see my mother crying
And I have to wonder where he’s been tonight
What other poor soul he’s busy comforting
And I wonder if they even realize that their so lucky
While I’m here surrounded by Little red pills and glass buildings
So many people around me holding stones
They don’t even realize where their heading
Till the shards of glass are flying
And with each new cut I closer to crying
And I think the horses next door can see right through me
They are crying with me
They cry with me till I swear
That I will never give up
Till this tragic sound reaches god
And his mercy crashes down
God save my soul
Please save my soul
Till I flew threw a window
And the shards of glass were flying
Cutting into my skin and with each new cut
I was that much closer to tears
The ones I promised to keep to myself
What a foolish promise
But then, these are foolish times
And the horses next door seem to know it
They cry with me
They cry with me till I swear
That I will never give up
Till the tragic sound reaches god
And his mercy crashes down
God save my soul
Please save my soul
Sometimes times I feel that he can hear me
Yet, Other times I see my mother crying
And I have to wonder where he’s been tonight
What other poor soul he’s busy comforting
And I wonder if they even realize that their so lucky
While I’m here surrounded by Little red pills and glass buildings
So many people around me holding stones
They don’t even realize where their heading
Till the shards of glass are flying
And with each new cut I closer to crying
And I think the horses next door can see right through me
They are crying with me
They cry with me till I swear
That I will never give up
Till this tragic sound reaches god
And his mercy crashes down
God save my soul
Please save my soul
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Reply #1 10/17/09 9:50am
Very moving. I really liked it.
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