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Take Me As I Am.

Posted on 10/01/09, 03:08 pm
Here I Stand.
Take Me As I Am.
Scared, Lost, Alone.
Heart Breaking, Wrists Bleeding.
So Vulnerable Without You.

Hold Me Close.
Lie To Me Like Before.
Tell Me You Love Me Again.
Make Me Smile Once More.
Wipe Away These Tears

Take Me Away From Here.
Take Me To A Special Place.
The Bridge Where We First Kissed.
The River Where We Lay.
When You Said You Love Me.

I Wish I Was There Again.
In Your Arms, Safe Again.
But The Reality Is You Don't Care.
You Don't Care For Me Anymore.
Not Like You Used To.

I Felt Your Heart Grow Cold.
I Saw Your Eyes Fill With Contempt.
You've Turned Me Away With Your Mind.
Your Words Are Meaningless Now.
It Will Never Be The Same Again.
Showing 8 Replies
  • Reply #1 10/01/09  3:18pm
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  • Reply #2 10/04/09  9:02am
    Very moving.
  • Reply #3 10/14/09  5:57am
    Agree very moving. You expressed yourself well.
  • Reply #4 10/21/09  11:01pm
    Love it. You did an amazing job expressing your pain. Can relate to this alot.
  • Reply #5 10/27/09  10:52am
    Very touching....
  • Reply #6 10/31/09  10:29pm
    Moving! Great job
  • Reply #7 11/06/09  4:55pm
    Well written sorry about your loss, dj
  • Reply #8 11/18/09  3:48pm
    Thank You =)

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