GDJ1957

Touch

Posted on 09/29/09, 02:42 am

As i reach my hand out
I long to touch some one
To feel love
To feel wanted
Yet all i feel is
The coldness of reality
The emptiness of my life
Then i ask myself
Does my life touch anyone
Or is this all an allusion

• Reply #1 10/03/09  4:58pm
  
  Annery
  i can relate. Good poem. There is nothing as an empty life, you touch alot of lives although you might not realise.
• Reply #2 10/21/09  11:03pm
  
  PorcelainSoul
  Great poem. Can relate to it to. Annery is right, whether you realise it or not, you touch alot of lives. Even things as simple as posting your poetry, or commenting on others poetry, can touch others' lives.
• Reply #3 10/27/09  10:51am
  
  startinanew
  Very well written..I can relate to it too.
  You are a real talent and I am sure you
  touch many people with your words.

welcome to poems written in blood. i once created a group called write away the pain. now i'm going to start over and see how many poets are out there. if anyone has a good poem to share or create. this is the right place for you. remember writing heals.