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Dead Rainbows
Posted on 11/02/09, 11:15 am
she sits in the corner of the room.
she feels the never ending doom
of all that passed
the boys stare
the girls glare
at all that passed
the girls approach
and drop the roach
of all that passed
she's the fag
stuffed in the bag
of all that passed
the knife comes across
her body is lost
LIKE ALL THOSE PAST!!!
she feels the never ending doom
of all that passed
the boys stare
the girls glare
at all that passed
the girls approach
and drop the roach
of all that passed
she's the fag
stuffed in the bag
of all that passed
the knife comes across
her body is lost
LIKE ALL THOSE PAST!!!
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Reply #1 11/04/09 9:54am
I like the way it is written. -
Reply #2 11/10/09 12:26am
hmm..well, i guess one of the rewards of poetry is the stirring it invokes in another's soul.
well written, good rhyme scheme....but fuck that man, it's truth, even in agony, it's soul to soul deep, y'know.
and that's always stirring!
thank you for it!
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