moonstar

Tangled

Posted on 10/30/09, 03:31 am

i walk in the sky looking for what used to be..
what used to set me free
but the sun is now square and the moon don't shine
i reach to hold those crystal stars to this heart of mine
but they just get all tangled up like old strands of christmas lights
and i feel my soul part from the joy
i once held
believed
lived
in this tangled up world

• Reply #1 10/30/09  4:02am
  
  GDJ1957
  I like the way it is written. It is sort of how I feel right now.
• Reply #2 10/31/09  3:02am
  
  voodooguru
  hi...
  it's really good. kinda' trading a dream for the cold reality of your life now.
  sad, but it's not impossible to find the dream again.
  thank you for it.

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