Discussion Topic
Still Friends
Posted on 10/17/09, 05:08 pm
When I was a little boy
I kissed him
And we had so much fun
And then it ended
For some reason he stopped
We sort of ignored each other
Until that night
We were horny teens
And ended up kissing
And then some more
It felt so good
I never wanted to stop
We did it for days and days
Days of making love
And yeah my feelings were deep
I didnt know for you
It was just a passing fad
I didnt know it would end
Yeah ok still friends
But nothing more than that
Its no big deal though
At least we learned
Who we were
And what we wanted..................
I kissed him
And we had so much fun
And then it ended
For some reason he stopped
We sort of ignored each other
Until that night
We were horny teens
And ended up kissing
And then some more
It felt so good
I never wanted to stop
We did it for days and days
Days of making love
And yeah my feelings were deep
I didnt know for you
It was just a passing fad
I didnt know it would end
Yeah ok still friends
But nothing more than that
Its no big deal though
At least we learned
Who we were
And what we wanted..................
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Reply #1 10/20/09 9:26pm
I don't know why you don't think you don't write well. I have always thought of a poem as framing a picture through words; you do that well. Have you ever thought of taking a writing class? I enjoy your writings because they are honest and unpretentious--and they don't distract. I particularly like the ending of this one--well done. -
Reply #2 10/30/09 11:18am
Thanks. I just dont think I am good at it like....others are able to use symbolism and say things more abstractly when I feel I just kind of say it like how I would talk....
Hmmm even now...I am not really saying this how I am thinking? Am I making sense? I dont know...arrrgh............
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