Discussion Topic
You..
Posted on 07/26/09, 10:47 pm
'You'
Thought you were so close to me,
but you're as distant as a star
You are here, I feel you
pulsating in every little scar
I do not see you, but I believe
your place of endless dwelling
is deep within my being
As long as I am alive
your heart will keep beating
The life I strive for
is not close enough to grasp
You hold it just out of reach
I fear I will never see it,
no matter how much time should elapse
You hold yourself high, crushing me with every step
You laugh as you trod, on
your mission to take my very last breath
You will not steal my rapture,
It is something you can't have
You will not take my laughter
and place it in my past
For, now I truely see you
I glance in your direction
I thought I only saw myself
but I realized, You are my depression
Thought you were so close to me,
but you're as distant as a star
You are here, I feel you
pulsating in every little scar
I do not see you, but I believe
your place of endless dwelling
is deep within my being
As long as I am alive
your heart will keep beating
The life I strive for
is not close enough to grasp
You hold it just out of reach
I fear I will never see it,
no matter how much time should elapse
You hold yourself high, crushing me with every step
You laugh as you trod, on
your mission to take my very last breath
You will not steal my rapture,
It is something you can't have
You will not take my laughter
and place it in my past
For, now I truely see you
I glance in your direction
I thought I only saw myself
but I realized, You are my depression
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Reply #1 10/01/09 4:26pm
thanks for sharing, i truly understand this, very well written -
Reply #2 10/01/09 10:51pm
Very powerful! I can really relate to it. -
Reply #3 10/04/09 3:17am
I like it -
Reply #4 11/08/09 5:40pm
Thanks for the comments.. It means a lot!




