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So its time

Posted on 10/03/08, 11:01 pm
My grave had always been the loving dream
Who knew that i could make that a reality.
Who knew that the world that i had seen was about to die before me
You wont miss me i know you wont and i know it shall never be
I remove mask for one day and night and thought all would be fine
but i can see now that all is read to die
If i cant be treated like a human being and be accepted
then i'll shall make you suffer.
How you may ask?
How is simple a questiona and i shall answer.
wont you cry when i'm gone?
Wont you feel the pain that you put through?
Your polotics and excusations can go to hell now!
Because i have fallen and see the truth that i wish wasnt that true
but i am a simple fish in a pond of others like me
of course friends become enimies and the world will never be enough for me
Love will only make me ill
So if i cant have all that i had hope for
Then no one will
No point in living if i cant feel the life inside

Morose-Mary
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  • Reply #1 10/06/08  12:50pm
    I stay pretty depressed so I can't preach to you, but I can plead for you not to do anything irrational. I know how hard it is sometimes just to roll out of bed and face another day, but your life is precious and is your sacred temple. Don't let the actions of others drive you to do something that you can never take back. Let me repeat. Can NEVER take back.

    Thank you for sharing this emotional piece.
  • Reply #2 10/29/08  11:24am
    No point in living if I can't feel the life inside. that was such a strong and important thought that many of us have had. But friend, I care about you and your unique lyrical beauty. I think writing really helps put words to our feelings and helps express things we don't need to understand but just live.
  • Reply #3 11/08/09  8:30pm
    Wow! I am glad I just happened upon this! I totally see this!
  • Reply #4 11/08/09  9:50pm
    yeah mm...
    aleister crowley said: “Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the Law", and i don't necessarily disagree, however, i would add, "Do not inflict harm upon yourself or others."
    crowley also said: Intolerance is evidence of impotence", and “If one were to take the bible seriously one would go mad. But to take the bible seriously, one must be already mad.â€, so we know his shit was tight.

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