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I have lost...
Posted on 03/09/09, 03:37 am
Feelings not fading,
waiting in frustration,
wanting to jump into mass destuction.
Fighting anger,
fighting solitude,
taking deep breaths through heaving pain.
I'm broken,
sometimes not able to stand.
I've lost something so golden and pure.
I'm left with emptiness and insecurities i cannot fathom.
Have i lost my future i wonder?
Have i turned over my sanity to no avail?
Will grace and virtue ever knock at my door acknowledging my existence?
I am hopeful, but unexpectant.
I am more longing for acceptance.
I loved, i lost, i suffer, i survive!
waiting in frustration,
wanting to jump into mass destuction.
Fighting anger,
fighting solitude,
taking deep breaths through heaving pain.
I'm broken,
sometimes not able to stand.
I've lost something so golden and pure.
I'm left with emptiness and insecurities i cannot fathom.
Have i lost my future i wonder?
Have i turned over my sanity to no avail?
Will grace and virtue ever knock at my door acknowledging my existence?
I am hopeful, but unexpectant.
I am more longing for acceptance.
I loved, i lost, i suffer, i survive!
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Reply #1 03/10/09 6:30am
what a great poem, i hope things get better for you, you deserve the nest. -
Reply #2 03/15/09 4:25am
I deserve the nest? ha,ha,ha I knew what you meant! Thanks! -
Reply #3 06/08/09 12:51pm
hey keep writing that is beautiful!!! -
Reply #4 11/01/09 10:29pm
I really like that, it's so real. I like the "directness" of the poem, it really felt like we were having a conversation lol.
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