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Flower
Posted on 02/27/09, 08:10 pm
**I posted this in another poetry group on here. It's actually a poem I wrote for a contest, but I thought I'd share it.**
I'm a flower
with all my petals
plucked off,
one by one,
while you sat there
smiling
in pure ecstasy,
unaware of me.
I have my thorns.
You have your honesty.
I'm a flower
whose posture,
once confident,
has wilted
slowly
while you turned
your head
away from me.
I have my thorns.
You have your honesty.
I'm a flower
with a softly fading
colour,
from bright green
to black,
while you allowed yourself
to forget -
a simple luxury.
I have my thorns.
You have your honesty.
I'm a flower
with all my petals
plucked off,
one by one,
while you sat there
smiling
in pure ecstasy,
unaware of me.
I have my thorns.
You have your honesty.
I'm a flower
whose posture,
once confident,
has wilted
slowly
while you turned
your head
away from me.
I have my thorns.
You have your honesty.
I'm a flower
with a softly fading
colour,
from bright green
to black,
while you allowed yourself
to forget -
a simple luxury.
I have my thorns.
You have your honesty.
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Reply #1 03/09/09 2:39am
I like gthe play on words!! -
Reply #2 03/14/09 11:43pm
Thanks!! :)
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